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This wasn't the plan

I wasn't supposed to be in this position
  completely torn between different worlds

You weren't supposed to leave me with
  all inspiration gone
  all signs of excitement missing

I wasn't supposed to be left here
  all alone
    to fend for myself
      and face my fears
  
You weren't supposed to leave
  another rip in this
    poor
      mangled
        heart

I wasn't supposed to blame you
  we knew this would happen
    sooner or later
      and we saw it coming
        but we let it lose control
          like a car on ice

You don't know how terrible
  this all feels
    but
      in the end we'll figure out something
        anything
          to get us by
            and forget this ever happened

This was never the plan
  I was supposed to be there
    and
      you were supposed to hold me close
        while we figured this
          awkward
            relationship out
              and made everything whole again
©2008-2009 ~OctoberTwilight
:iconoctobertwilight:

Author's Comments

They're always meant to be broken.

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:iconmemoriesofporcelain:
~memoriesofporcelain Aug 5, 2008, 7:37:09 PM
not always.

--
I'm a statue, baby; knock me out.
---x---
:iconoctobertwilight:
~OctoberTwilight Aug 5, 2008, 7:41:48 PM
Haha, mine are.
Or just altered to a point I call them broken.
:iconmemoriesofporcelain:
~memoriesofporcelain Aug 5, 2008, 7:53:33 PM
maybe we need to know what broken and altered feels like before we realize and appreciate to the fullest extent what's whole. otherwise, a whole heart will always wonder, and never really know, what's true.

--
I'm a statue, baby; knock me out.
---x---
:iconoctobertwilight:
~OctoberTwilight Aug 5, 2008, 8:01:57 PM
Of course.
It's like the whole not knowing what you have until its gone thing.
:iconmemoriesofporcelain:
~memoriesofporcelain Aug 5, 2008, 8:07:13 PM
or not knowing what you want because you've never experienced what you don't want :) love through proccess of elimination, peices are taken along the way, but in the end someone could fill in all the empty spaces.

--
I'm a statue, baby; knock me out.
---x---
:iconoctobertwilight:
~OctoberTwilight Aug 5, 2008, 8:12:33 PM
Haha, yeah. I've learned that, somewhat.
:iconmemoriesofporcelain:
~memoriesofporcelain Aug 5, 2008, 8:18:13 PM
i haven't. so naturally, i wonder.

--
I'm a statue, baby; knock me out.
---x---
:iconhakk-n-slash:
~Hakk-N-Slash Aug 11, 2008, 7:02:46 PM
Yet another simplistic yet beautiful display of common people in a misshapen and distorted society left to wonder about relationships.

*Bravo!*
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