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They say you’re not worth it
Oh, but you are
You’re worth it to me.

They say I don’t realize what you’re doing to me
I do, I do, and I’ll submerge myself in every moment of it
It’s selective hearing, not selective knowledge.

They say I’ve wasted precious words on you
As is the time I spend thinking about you
I say it’s well spent.

They say you don’t deserve me
Well, if you don’t then who does?
Certainly not them.

They say I can do better, don’t rush love darling
It wasn’t rushed, it came slow and steady
I could do better, but better means having you to myself.

What I’m trying to say is different than what they say
It was true then and remains true even now
I love you, you idiot.
©2008-2009 ~OctoberTwilight
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For once I've written something that isn't bitter.

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:iconhakk-n-slash:
One like you who writes with such intensity and passion needs some one who can return it... I love this poem and what it represents. Bravo!
:icondunkler-adlig:
i like the last line =p

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